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I really do. by ~hugwhorechels:iconhugwhorechels:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Open




I wish you were here,
I really do.
I wish I was in your arms.
They protect me.
They’re perfect.

I wish you were here,
I really do.
I wish I could kiss you,
Sweetly;
Just press my mouth against yours.

I wish you were here,
I really do.
I wish I could run up to you
And hug you,
Throw my arms around you with glee.

I wish you were here,
I really do.
I wish I could let myself sink
Into the nook in your neck
That seems to be made for me to curl up in.

I wish you were here,
I really do.
I wish I could hold your hand,
Putting your fingers in between mine,
Where they connect perfectly.

I wish you were here,
I really do.
But I love you more than enough to know that
We’ll be together so very soon, forever,
And in that very moment, my life will be perfect.


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May 2008.

I love you Ryan, more than I could ever put into words.
I hope you'll always know that.
:heart:
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~artistically-tragicx:iconartistically-tragicx: May 10, 2008, 9:28:01 PM
awww very sweet poem!

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Mood: Caring ~ZaPoet:iconZaPoet: May 10, 2008, 9:29:51 PM
finally I found someone thats feels the same about some one as I feel about the girl I love
I get a very strong feeling from the last two stanzas.
If you could check out my love poems and tell me if they're nearly as good as this that would be awesome and would really make me feel better either way

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Mood: Compassion ~XxDeadeyesxX:iconXxDeadeyesxX: May 10, 2008, 9:32:12 PM
I know sweetheart :heart:

I love you so much xoxoxox

I'll always be there. Promise.

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Mood: Speechless ~tamarack1pines:icontamarack1pines: May 10, 2008, 9:37:17 PM
:worship: :hug: :clap: :iconnewglomp: ^^; :sprint:

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~hugwhorechels:iconhugwhorechels: May 10, 2008, 9:49:12 PM
I'll definitely read and comment them. Thank you for the wonderful comment. :)
~hugwhorechels:iconhugwhorechels: May 10, 2008, 9:53:58 PM
Good. :) I love you so much, darling. :heart: I'm very happy that you feel the same.
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~hugwhorechels:iconhugwhorechels: May 10, 2008, 9:55:38 PM
:) Thank you for the worshipping, followed by hugging and applause, a "glomp" (whatever that may be), and then the profuse sweating and hauling of arse out of there.
I appreciate it very much, thank you. :)
~tamarack1pines:icontamarack1pines: May 10, 2008, 10:06:30 PM
:giggle: You have succeeded in making me laugh with your nice and funny comment! :lmao: :D

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